Analysis of The Trees Are Down

Charlotte Mary Mew 1869 (Bloomsbury, London) – 1928 (London)



and he cried with a loud voice: Hurt not the earth, neither the sea, nor the trees - Revelation

They are cutting down the great plane-trees at the end of
the gardens.
For days there has been the grate of the saw, the swish of
the branches as they fall,
The crash of the trunks, the rustle of trodden leaves,
With the 'Whoops' and the 'Whoa', the loud common talk,
the loud common laughs of the men, above it all.

I remember one evening of a long past Spring
Turning in at a gate, getting out of a cart, and finding
a large dead rat in the mud of the drive.
I remember thinking: alive or dead, a rat was a
god-forsaken thing,
But at least, in May, that even a rat should be alive.

The week's work here is as good as done. There is just
one bough
On the roped bole, in the fine grey rain,
Green and high
And lonely against the sky.
(Down now! -)
And but for that,
If an old dead rat
Did once, for a moment, unmake the Spring, I might never
have thought of him again.

It is not for a moment the Spring is unmade to-day;
These were great trees, it was in them from root to stem:
When the men with the 'Whoops' and the 'Whoas' have carted
the whole of the whispering loveliness away
Half the Spring, for me, will have gone with them.

It is going now, and my heart has been struck with the
hearts of the planes;
Half my life it has beat with these, in the sun, in the rains,
In the March wind, the May breeze,
In the great gales that came over to them across the roofs from the great seas.
There was only a quiet rain when they were dying;
They must have heard the sparrows flying,
And the small creeping creatures in the earth where they were lying -
But I, all day, I heard an angel crying:
'Hurt not the trees.'


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Poetic Form
Metre 011101111011001101010 1110101111011 010 1111101101011 010111 011010101101 10100101101 011011010111 101011010111 100101101101010 0111001101 10101001110110 10101 11101110011101 011111111111 11 101100111 101 0100101 11 0111 11111 1110101011110 111101 11110100110111 101111011111 101101001110 0110100101 1011111111 1110101111110 1101 11111111001001 0011011 001111101101011011 1110010111010 111101010 001101000111010 11111111010 1101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,689
Words 344
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 6, 10, 5, 10
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 57
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Charlotte Mary Mew

Charlotte Mary Mew was an English poet whose work spans the eras of Victorian poetry and Modernism.  more…

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