Analysis of Our Soldier Boy



Written as a tribute to my brother, W. M. Strang, with the Engineers.

He said, "I'm Daddy's soldier boy,"
When he was five years old;
And then went out and built snow forts,
Although the day was cold.

The snowballs were his hand grenades,
A stick his bayonette;
And with a home-made wooden gun
The foe he bravely met.

In five more years he joined the "scouts"
And hiked across the hills;
He learned to wear a khaki suit,
And do military drills.

And so the years passed swiftly on,
And now he is a man;
He's in the trenches over there,
Fighting for Uncle Sam.

I know he'll make the Huns regret
They started this big fight,
For he knows the cause he's fighting for
Is liberty and right.


Scheme X XAXA XAXB XCXC XXXX BDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 10101011101001110101 11110101 111111 01110111 10111 0101101 0111 01011101 011101 01111101 010101 11110101 011001 01011101 011101 10010101 101101 11110101 110111 111011101 110001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 682
Words 137
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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