Analysis of Blow Me Eyes!

Wallace Irwin 1875 – 1959



When I was young and full o' pride,
        A-standin' on the grass
    And gazin' o'er the water-side,
        I seen a fisher lass.
    "O, fisher lass, be kind awhile,"
        I asks 'er quite unbid.
    "Please look into me face and smile"
        And, blow me eyes, she did!

O, blow me light and blow me blow,
    I didn't think she'd charm me so,
        But, blow me eyes, she did!

She seemed so young and beautiful
        I had to speak perlite,
    (The afternoon was long and dull,
        But she was short and bright).
    "This ain't no place," I says, "to stand,
        Let's take a walk instid,
    Each holdin' of the other's hand"
        And, blow me eyes, she did!

O, blow me light and blow me blow,
    I sort o' thunk she wouldn't go,
        But, blow me eyes, she did!
    And as we walked along a lane
        With no one else to see,
    Me heart was filled with sudden pain,
        And so I says to she:
    "If you would have me actions speak
        The words what can't be hid,
    You'd sort o' let me kiss yer cheek"
        And, blow me eyes, she did!

O, blow me light and blow me blow,
    How sweet she was I didn't know,
        But, blow me eyes, she did!

But pretty soon me shipmate Jim
        Came strollin' down the beach,
    And she began a-oglin' him
        As pretty as a peach.
    "O, fickle maid o' false intent,"
        Impulsively I chid,
    "Why don't you go and wed that gent?"
        And, blow me eyes, she did!

O, blow me light and blow me blow,
    I didn't think she'd treat me so,
        But, blow me eyes, she did!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 01101 01100101 110101 11011101 11011 11011101 011111 11110111 11011111 111111 11110100 111110 0011101 111101 11111111 11011 1110101 011111 11110111 11111101 111111 01110101 111111 11111101 011111 11111101 011111 11111111 011111 11110111 11111101 111111 1101111 11101 0101011 110101 11011101 010011 11110111 011111 11110111 11011111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,631
Words 286
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 3, 8, 11, 3, 8, 3
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted by naama on July 15, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Irwin

Wallace Irwin (March 15, 1875 – February 14, 1959) was an American writer. more…

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