Analysis of My Hermitage

Alexander Posey 1873 (Eufaula, Creek Nation, Indian Territory) – 1908 (Oklahoma)



Between me and the noise of strife
    Are walls of mountains set with pine;  
The dusty, care-strewn paths of life  
    Lead not to this retreat of mine.  

I hear the morning wind awake  
   Beyond the purple height,  
And, in the growing light,  
   The lap of lilies on the lake.  

I live with Echo and with Song,  
   And Beauty leads me forth to see  
Her temple’s colonnades, and long
    Together do we love to be.  

The mountains wall me in, complete,  
   And leave me but a bit blue
Above.    All year, the days are sweet—
    How sweet! And all the long nights thro’  

I hear the river flowing by  
   Along its sandy bars;  
Behold, far in the midnight sky,  
    An infinite of stars!  

‘Tis sweet, when all is still,  
   When darkness gathers round,  
To hear, from hill to hill,  
   The far, the wandering sound.  

The cedar and the pine
   Have pitched their tents with me.  
What freedom vast is mine!  
    What room! What mystery!  

Upon the dreamy southern breeze,  
    That steals in like a laden bee  
And sighs for rest among the trees,  
   Are far-blown bits of melody.  

What afterglows the twilight hold,  
    The darkening skies along!  
And O, what rose-like dawns unfold,  
    That smite the hills to song!  

High in the solitude of air,  
   The gray hawk circles on and on,  
Till, like a spirit soaring there,  
    His image pales and he is gone!


Scheme ABAB CDDC EFEF GXGH IJIJ KLKL BFBF MFMF NENE HXHX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (33%)
Metre 01100111 11110111 01011111 11110111 11010101 010101 000101 01110101 11110011 01011111 010101 01011111 01011001 0111011 01110111 11010111 11010101 011101 0110011 110011 111111 110101 111111 0101001 010001 111111 110111 111100 01010101 11010101 01110101 11111100 110011 0100101 01111101 110111 1001011 01110101 11010101 11010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,369
Words 234
Sentences 15
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 24
Font size:
 

Submitted by halel on July 13, 2020

Modified on May 03, 2023

1:10 min read
97

Alexander Posey

Alexander Lawrence Posey was an American poet, humorist, journalist, and politician in the Creek Nation. He founded the Eufaula Indian Journal in 1901, the first Native American daily newspaper. more…

All Alexander Posey poems | Alexander Posey Books

1 fan

Discuss this Alexander Posey poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "My Hermitage" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 7 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/54127/my-hermitage>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    24
    days
    0
    hours
    44
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who is the author of the poem "The Raven"?
    A Edgar Allan Poe
    B Langston Hughes
    C Emily Dickinson
    D Robert Frost