Analysis of An old soul......



An old soul.....

It used to be fun when everyone was around,
Now is the time when everything has turned around.

Living long was once a boon n a blessing,
But now it's no more than any suffering.

Ageing eyes cannot see, ageing ears cannot hear,
Each passing day feels like a year.

Seeing one's kids from cradle to grave,
My old heart is no longer that brave.

Please take me away cries my aching heart,
Listen to me my Almighty, it's time for me to depart....


Scheme X AA BB XX CC DD
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11111110101 11011101101 10111011010 11111110100 1110111101 11011101 101111011 111111011 1110111101 101110101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 484
Words 89
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on June 29, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kinjal Shah

Hi. I am a dentist by profession and a mother of 2 darling children. Writing poems has been my hobby since I was very young. more…

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