Analysis of The Abyss



Into the abyss we go
At the bottom we not know
For the sky above we seek
Yet we crawl down to that so deep
We hurry away from which we found
Finding out which made us frown
We care for those whose smiles they bring
We care for those who mean everything
When it is over, complete, and done
Just please know, I am never gone


Scheme AABCDEFFGH
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 0100111 1010111 1010111 11111111 110011111 1011111 11111111 11111110 111100101 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 313
Words 67
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 253
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Submitted by Porterpete on June 17, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Peter Conde

I am writing this because it is close to my brothers birthday, I miss him, he took his own life. Rest In Peace, hope we see each other in the next life. more…

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