Analysis of Lost in my own life



I'm crying and hiding every night
I'm just a visitor in my own mind
Everything starts and everything ends
No more lucky days, no more loving friends

Stop hiding their secrets, start being hopeless
And get ready to hell
Doesn't matter if you are fucked up or clueless
Hope you don't expect they'll help

To annoy, harass and bother
I remember those times when I was five
Don't want to live like this further
Just choose between quiet death and awful life

Sitting in a corner, so cold, so scared
True is, that none of you really cared
But I don't really mind
'Cause every person I knew was blind


Scheme XABB CXCX DXDX EEAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 1100101001 1101000111 1010101 1110111101 11011011010 011011 101011111110 1110111 10101010 1010111111 11111110 11011010101 1000101111 111111101 111101 1100101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 577
Words 110
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on June 15, 2020

Modified on March 14, 2023

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