Analysis of The superiority of the departure



The superiority of the departure
By
Mohammed Alaa Abdul Hadi Dr.
Translated by
Hassan Hegazy Hassan
Egypt

(I)
And my mouth extends its dam so as not to pass!
Her hand poured on me  ... my astonishment,
Your hands ..
 Are spinning in my hand its whimpering,
All I have hidden in your hands from grieve,
The storms are made of it.

(II)
Two eyes..
The eye of water...  Is kind as a prophet  
An eye.. The color of its sky..
Hardens heavily on me,
Made me suspect me,  
If my sand stretch in the heart.

(III)
I will cling to what remains of my joy,
The longing will not sit with me,
Longing is not a rope..  
So, how shall I ascend a body of thorns?
The chair does not stretch in my pores
A sitting for you  to drink,  
From the fire of my heart the bitter coffee.

(IV)
You, who have stitched with the thread of her avoidance...
The silence that is lowered between us
I have kept it as a secret... A body that will     
Imprison in its deserts the free sparrows.  
For the herd of the wind to distribute
 Among us his flock.

(V)
I run.. my bones are tracing me,
Throwing at you the scared regret...
Stretching from your heart its shade,  
I have no sin,
For my heart to run towards the pottery/fire  
To be slapped with the whinnying ..
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Malta - Valletta – 1977


Scheme ABXBXC BXXXDEX FXXBGGX FXGXXXXG EXXXXXX GGXXXAD C
Poetic Form
Metre 00010010010 1 01010111 0101 01101 10 1 011011111111 0111110100 11 1100111100 1111001111 011111 1 11 01110111010 11010111 1010011 11011 1111001 1 1111101111 01011111 101101 11110101011 01111011 0101111 101011101010 1 111110110010 0101110011 1111101001011 01001100110 1011011010 01111 1 11111101 10110101 1011111 1111 1111101010010 111101 1 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,228
Words 240
Sentences 21
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 7, 8, 7, 9
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted by Hegazyhhh on February 20, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:12 min read
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Mohammed Alaa Abdul Hadi

Mohammed Alaa Abdul Hadi *Dr. -He is an Egyptian poet, academic critic and thinker, with fourteen issues in poetry, ten critical and intellectual books, and three translations about English, Hungarian, and dozens of research papers. He participated in the discussion of several Master degrees and Ph.D. He is the president of the Egyptian Association of Comparative Poetry, member of the Supreme Press Council and member of the Board of the Faculty of Dar Al Ulum - Fayoum University and member of the Board of Directors of Al-Kalam International Club. He is currently the president of Egypt's Writer Union / President of the Egyptian Association for Comparative Literature. more…

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