Analysis of Slow Wisdom



Tap roots take up water now

that last spring’s snow melt sent down

slowly, through and between the stones;

The action of sun and capillary draw up the water

with its burden of minerals and wisdom,

absorbed from the stones, the bones, of Earth;

The tree knows its own impermanence

through the wisdom of the stones,

and savors each season’s sun and storm

in its own slow-watching, sharing with the Earth;

Then come I,

too hurried to understand

that the sap of the tree rushes through its limbs

when seen by the slower seep of the rock’s water,

Or, to realize that my own blood boils through my veins

a brief moment and is gone;

By the grace of the Consciousness that fills all things,

as I sit, leaned against the tree,

Some small bit of the Earth’s wisdom, knowing

that even the stone is only a temporary flicker

in the eye of eternity -

Graces me to know that I am both transient and forever.

William L. Kotila


Scheme X X A B X C A A X C X X X B X X X D X B D B X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 1111111 10100101 01011010011010 11101100010 011010111 011111 1010101 010110101 01111010101 111 110101 10110110111 111010110110 111011111111 0110011 101101001111 11110101 1111011010 11001110010010 00110100 101111111100010 101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,147
Words 173
Sentences 3
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted on February 19, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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