Analysis of Sleep & Suicide



Any one wants much relief, 
Disturb the one's by a belief, 
The best relief is as a sleep, 
It is the only that is cheap, 
Later asleep we are lived, 
But after death we have died, 
Sleep is relief but death is pain, 
Who choose death what they gain, 
Then not allow suicide in a belief, 
Now life is fragrance in a grief.


Scheme AABBCDEEAA
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1011101 01011001 01011101 11010111 1001111 1101111 11011111 111111 1101100001 11110001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 322
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 240
Words per stanza (avg) 63
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Submitted by on February 03, 2020

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Mazloom Gill

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