Analysis of my abyss
digging into the dark recesses of my mind.
soul searching but how can i when i feel so fuckin blind.
thought that shit was over... wow... that shit snapped back in my head like ou!
bringing back all these painful memories.
finding out what it all really meant to me.
but now i'm in my head going through that rewind
and now i'm really wondering why.
but you cant live your life constantly in yo mind
on rewind
i'm saying to myself i gotta free my mind!
trying to make sense of this shit but at the end of the day.
my conclusion is all this shit is just a fucking pretense.
i'm just using this shit to say what i really wanna say.
cuz i'm so tired of always being on the defense.
my life its so fucking hard to condense.
just trying to find out what it all fuckin meant to me.
none of this shit makes sense to me.
gotta move on & become something great.
but as i'm trying yall just pushing all that hate.
cuz i really just want this life shit to be redefined.
all the time knowing i'm my own life's mastermind.
and hold that shit in my mind.
been holding that shit to my breast.
all this time wondering whats coming for me next.
who's gonna rape me of my keys to success.
still trying to stay inspired but its so hard
when all that's transpired.
constantly thinking somethings a fuckinmis.
cuz i'm constantly stuck down in my abyss.
Scheme | AA X BC AX AA A DE D EE CC FF AA A XX X XX BX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 100101100111 1101111111111 1111101111101111 1011110100 10111110111 111011101110 011101001 111111100011 110 11011110111 101111111101101 101011111101001 111011111110101 1111011101001 1111101101 1101111111111 11111111 101101101 111101110111 11101111111001 10110111110 0111011 11011111 111100010111 11011111101 110110101111 111010 10010101 11100110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,313 |
Words | 257 |
Sentences | 27 |
Stanzas | 17 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 61 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 15 |
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