Analysis of The Babylonian Captivity

Charles Harpur 1813 (Windsor) – 1868 (Australia)



By far Euphrates’ stream we state,
   A weary band of herded slaves,
And over Judah’s fallen estate
   We wept into the passing waves.

On willow-boughs that o’er us bent
   Our once glad-sounding harps were hung,
That but the wild wind, as it went,
   Might grieve their wailful chords among.

But they who spoiled us—even they
   Who wasted us with daily wrongs,
To make them mirth did asking say:
   “Come sing us one of Zion’s songs!”

How can with us the will remain
   To strike the harp with fettered hand?
How can we sing a joyful strain
   As captives in a foreign land?

And when, Jerussalem! We let
   Thy memory pass on Time’s grey wing,
May our right hands at once forget
   Their mastery o’er the sounding string!

Yea, let our tongues to song be dumb,
   As in a dull and voiceless dream,
Till to thy courts again we come
   And thy redemption be the theme!

Then, Edom, thou shalt get thy wound!
   For thou, on Zion’s evil day,
Saidst—“Raze her beauty to the ground,
   And captive drive her sons away!”

And lo! Yet fiercer visions rise,
   The day is fixed, the hour is known,
When, Babylon! Thy fateful skies
   Shall raid red wrath and ruin down!

Till by thy towers all overthrown,
   Thy daughters, desolate as we,
Each with her shame shall sit alone,
   With shame and wild-faced misery!

And then may the avenger dash
   Thy children’s heads against stones;
For so, ’mid Zion’s falling crash,
   Didst thou with all our little ones.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ KLKL MEME NONX OPOP QXQX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (38%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11010111 01011101 01011001 11010101 1111111 101110101 11011111 1111101 11111101 11011101 11111101 11111101 11110101 11011101 11110101 11000101 01111 110011111 110111101 110010101 111011111 10010101 11110111 01010101 1111111 11110101 11010101 01010101 01110101 011101011 1101101 11110101 11110101 11010011 11011101 11011100 01100101 1101011 11110101 111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,489
Words 257
Sentences 16
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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