Analysis of An Aboriginal Mothers's Lament
Charles Harpur 1813 (Windsor) – 1868 (Australia)
An Aboriginal Mother’s Lament
Charles Harpur
[About the year 1842 a party of stockmen, several of whom were afterwards hanged for the crime, made a wholesale slaughter of a small tribe of defenceless blacks; one woman only, with her infant, escaped from the murderers.]
Still farther would I fly, my child,
To make thee safer yet,
From the unsparing white man,
With his dread hand murder-wet!
I’ll bear thee on as I have borne
With stealthy steps wind-fleet,
But the dark night shrouds the forest,
And thorns are in my feet.
O moan not! I would give this braid—
Thy father’s gift to me—
But for a single palmful
Of water now for thee.
Ah! Spring not to his name—no more
To glad us may he come!
He is smouldering into ashes
Beneath the blasted gum!
All charred and blasted by the fire
The white man kindled there,
And fed with our slaughtered kindred
Till heaven-high went its glare!
O moan not! I would give this braid—
Thy father’s gift to me—
For but a single palmful
Of water now for thee.
And but for thee, I would their fire
Had eaten me as fast!
Hark! Hark! I hear his death-cry
Yet lengthening up the blast!
But no—when that we should fly,
On the roaring pyre flung bleeding—
I saw thy father die!
O moan not! I would give this braid—
Thy father’s gift to me—
For but a single palmful
Of water now for thee.
No more shall his loud tomahawk
Be plied to win our cheer,
Or the shining fish-pools darken
Beneath his shadowing spear;
The fading tracks of his fleet foot
Shall guide not as before,
And the mountain-spirits mimic
His hunting call no more!
O moan not! I would give this braid—
Thy father’s gift to me—
For but a single palmful
Of water now for thee.
Scheme | xa x xbxbxcxcDEfE agxgaaxa DEFE ahahfxx DEFE xaxaxaxa DEFE |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (32%) |
Metre | 101001001 11 0101010111011010011011011010111111101010100110100 11011111 111101 1001011 1111101 11111111 110111 10111010 011011 11111111 110111 110101 110111 11111111 111111 1110110 010101 110101010 011101 011101010 1101111 11111111 110111 110101 110111 011111110 110111 1111111 1100101 1111111 101010110 111101 11111111 110111 110101 110111 1111110 1111101 10101110 0111001 01011111 111101 00101010 110111 11111111 110111 110101 110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,981 |
Words | 316 |
Sentences | 22 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 12, 8, 4, 7, 4, 8, 4 |
Lines Amount | 50 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 144 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on April 19, 2023
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