Analysis of The Bad Monk

Charles Baudelaire 1821 (Paris) – 1867 (Paris)



On the great walls of ancient cloisters were nailed
Murals displaying Truth the saint,
Whose effect, reheating the pious entrails
Brought to an austere chill a warming paint.

In the times when Christ was seeded around,
More than one illustrious monk, today unknown
Took for a studio the funeral grounds
And glorified Death as the one way shown.

—My soul is a tomb, an empty confine
Since eternity I scour and I reside;
Nothing hangs on the walls of this hideous sty.

O lazy monk! When will I see
The living spectacle of my misery,
The work of my hands and the love of my eyes?

Translated by William A. Sigler

Submitted by Ryan McGuire


Scheme XAXA XBXB XXX CCX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 10111101001 10010101 101101010 1110110101 0011111001 111010010101 1101001001 010110111 1110111001 101001100101 101101111001 11011111 01010011100 01111001111 0101100100 01011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 629
Words 117
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Charles Baudelaire

Charles Pierre Baudelaire was a French poet who also produced notable work as an essayist, art critic, and pioneering translator of Edgar Allan Poe. more…

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