Analysis of My Uncorrected Vision



When I set my gaze to afar,
I can't see an oncoming car.

When I crash into a deer,
it suddenly becomes clear.

When I'm visiting the South,
I can't see the croc (gator?) until I'm in its mouth.


Scheme AA BB CC
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11111101 1111101 1110101 1100011 1110001 1110110011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 188
Words 40
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted by Deturgescence Master on April 25, 2019

Modified by Deturgescence Master on April 25, 2019

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