Analysis of Solemn Peak 4
SHAPED BACK A DREAM TO FILL MY SOUL RESCUE ME BEFORE A FOLD
BOBBy DARIN IS WHA'S MAYBE SCARIN BUT IM STILL STARIN
WHAT GOOD BURNIN CAUSE TO WANT YOU BACK FROM THE SOFA SPENT
WALK WITH ME DEEP BELOW THE BREEZE THERE i FLIRT WITH THE HEAT OF THE MOMENT
TRAPPED WITHIN A SEQUENCE TO A FIGURE OF SPEACH TO WANT
YES YOU ARE DEAD BUT YOU ARE FAR MORE TO A STAGE
LOVE SAYS i GOT TO STAND TALL
THROUGH THE CAGE OF SHRIMP
SEE THE PLASTIC CLOWN DON'T YOU EVEN CARE
RAIN A TOP OF A BILLBOARD SCORE
SEE BELOW THE VERY DUST YOU BLEED SORROW THAT YOU ARE IN NEED
FIGURE A MERE SHADOW COUNT IN THE VELVET UNDERGROUND
THERE YOU ARE STIRRING UP TROUBLE MAKE MY mARTINI STRONG ON THE DOUBLE
FOLD MY HANDS YOU GOT TO WAIT A WHILE BUT i MEANT TO KISS YOU
STEAK IN THE HEART KNOWN TO BE BLOWN APART
DREAMS IN THE SHADOWS PIERCING BACK THOSE SKULLS HAUNTED OUT TO SEA
BASK IN THE HOUSE TO PRETEND TO BE SOMETHNG MORE
The Desert Mouse Has Returned To My House
You watch as I rot inside my cage
getting lost in a purple haze
Like a mouse stuck in it's maze
wake up late to one of those days
Let's look deep inside
we have nothing to hide
Sidewalks filled with heads
the sought corruption of the walking dead
pillars, columns & staircases
We leave a lasting trace
spread out upon are Peyton Place
You must walk in the almighty's ways
creatures, features & moonlight dealers
Blood soaked skin on their brow
lines formed in their face
Viscous long hanging fangs that bite
Creatures of the night
fallen demonic members that surround
Sound the alarm
not for the faint in hearted
One must humbly bow the knee to pray
the atheist would insist it aught not be this way
Shadows break forth toward a bond of revolt
others seek vengeance and take you to court
Evil minds that plug destruction
torturing their brain washed minds
Satan laughing spreads his wings
a challenge to be free is a question of time
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,845 |
Words | 362 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 46 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 137 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 33 |
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