Analysis of Mercurys' bid with eternity



MERCURYS'   BID   WITH ETERNITY

lately queen a bid with eternity a humble plea
to stand in ovation amidst an earnest vacation
1986 the sorrowful fix a man and his gun unleak his cum
serving ditches ignoring all those bitches
Freddie Mercury bid with eternity
Bohemian Rap you see..,
although he had many loves the tender look at loves ovation
knock on the door where he was ready to go
"WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS"....,

all his thoughts were putting him further and further away from God
wanted to instead go to P town on the banks of Cape Cod
like a flock of seagulls there the wind blows
nurse the rhyme to begin to fly
Mercury lives out the lie

that says I am what I do
bit off more then he could chew
Freddie you see..,
painful to see

a vision of trans between his blended humanity
some friends to see below the breeze
Freddie you see was getting lost into a fixed reality
smoke of the gun between a rise in his jeans,

Although for some he was a slave to sin
here is where I humbly begin deep from within again
learning a little bit as he was coming along
I want to ride my bicycle I want to ride it well...,

for some he was a nobody in their minds but was hidden behind
a surplus to learn how to manage he comes as a slave next turn to believe
Freddie to stay Mercury the purpose of his winning
the end from the truest beginning

Freddie came to believe a bit of a mystery
his weakness and his strength would rise
the develop of a following dig deeper to remember
every time we are tempted about something

there always comes an opportunity
although he thought he had every thing he is thrown into a prison of curtains
pay no attention to his that is behind the curtain,
yet it payed to be the one the only Freddie M ercury

The devil came to Freddie and he answered its call
then we hear he melodies lurking at your neighborhood mall
on the banks of the roller rink so many years ago master the flow
dreams of recaping what one was basking,

Freddie will have to stand before his maker
not to which sprayed a get together as a singer
he stood for power in a quaint reserve,
balanced power relieved

Only God Knows !


Scheme A ABXXAABCD EEFGG HHAA AXAX XXXX XXII AXJI ADBJ KKCI JJXX F
Poetic Form
Metre 1110100 10101101000101 11001001110010 0100101011111 10100101110 10100110100 0100111 111101010111010 11011111011 110100 1110101100100111 101011111101111 101111011 10110111 1001101 1111111 1111111 1011 1011 01011011100100 11110101 10111101010110 11010101011 111110111 11111001110101 1001011111001 11111100111111 111101011111001 0101111101110111101 10111000101110 011010010 1011010110100 11001111 0010101001101010 100111100110 11110100 11111100111101010110 11010111101010 11111010101011 0101110011011 11111001011101 101101011101011001 11111110 10111101110 1111010101010 1111000101 101001 1011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,073
Words 406
Sentences 5
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by hitalot on November 24, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:01 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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