Analysis of The Chosen Path

Thomas C Henshaw 1618 (England) – 1700 (England)



I chose a path to walk today
Ahead a man stood in my way

I asked him if I could go past
He said I needed but to ask

He asked to sit and talk awhile
Then I saw his tender smile

The path you chose is long and hard
With obstacles be on your guard

The path you chose has many turns
With perils for the unconcerned

Make wise decisions upon your way
Perhaps we'll meet another day

In later years I saw this man again
Soldiers were unclothing him

Accused of crimes that should not be
That gentle man who spoke with me

They nailed him to a cross of wood
From whence a mighty tree had stood

They pierced his body with a spear
He made no cry nor shed a tear

They raised him high into the air
I heard a voice upon my ear

The masters voice loud and clear
I knelt before the cross to hear

I lay my burdens at his feet
While listening to the voice so sweet

THIS SON I GAVE TO SET YOU FREE
HIS DEATH SHALL SERVE HUMANITY

THE PATH YOU CHOSE I CLEARLY SEE
IT WILL BRING YOU UNTO ME

THIS PATH OF VIRTUE FREE OF VICE
WILL LEAD YOU HOME TO PARADISE

Thomas C Henshaw


Scheme AA XX BB CC XX AA XX DD EE FG GH FH II DD DD JJ X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 01011011 11111111 11110111 11110101 1111101 01111101 11001111 01111101 1101001 110100111 01110101 0101111101 10011 01111111 11011111 11110111 11010111 11110101 11111101 11110101 11010111 0101101 11010111 11110111 110010111 11111111 11110100 01111101 1111101 11110111 1111110 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,066
Words 218
Sentences 1
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on November 24, 2018

Modified on March 07, 2023

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Thomas C Henshaw

Thomas Henshaw (1618–1700) was an English lawyer, courtier, diplomat and scientific writer. While not a published alchemist, he was a significant figure in English alchemical work from the 1650s onwards; he is known to have used the pen-name "Halophilus". more…

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