Analysis of The Adoration Of Amber



I watch as she enters the garden,

Unaware of my gaze.

In bright white luminescence,

She hums a melodic phrase.

The flowers bloom to greet her,

Birds flutter about, chirping along.

The angelic chorus caresses my ears,

my longing is lost in her song.

The grass she walks upon rejoices her steps,

air and sunlight fight to sustain.

Her radiant beauty, healing light moves my shadows,

calming the winds of my hurricane.

I stare into the universe of your eyes,

hypnotized and mesmerized in blissful abandon,

I am lost, do not wish to be found,

your ethereal essence I stand in.

Sheets in disarray and smooth legs for my hands,

The sound of the rain and the howling wind.

I hold you close and I kiss your lips.

Your fire, my desire must never rescind.

Your scent snares me as I kiss your neck,

Hard and unashamed is my desire for you.

You're running late you head for the door,

fade into the distance yet I feel brand-new.

Laying in bed, staring up at my phone.

Your translucence blinds me gently.

I willfully lose sight at your beauty,

For you are my desire and I listen intently.

In the silence a song can be heard,

In an unknown key and glorious timbre.

My admiration and my love,

The adoration of Amber.


Scheme A B X B C D X D X E X E X A X X X X X X X F X F X G G G X C X C
Poetic Form
Metre 111110010 01111 011010 1100101 0101110 110011001 0101001011 11011001 011101101 1011101 010010101111 10011110 1101010111 10010010010 111111111 1010010110 1001011111 0110100101 111101111 110101011001 111111111 10011101011 110111101 10101011111 1001101111 111110 1100111110 11110100110010 001001111 01011010010 1010011 0010110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,170
Words 221
Sentences 17
Stanzas 32
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted on November 23, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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Arthur Cavazos

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