Analysis of The Broken Wing



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A racing pigeon of distance ability,
His colour known as grizzle, that is
White feathers spotted with other spots
Of colour. A likeable and interesting bird
And when he was less than a year old I
Sent him for a training flight
In preparation for racing.

But upon the arrival of the flock to
My loft the grizzle was missing. So
I assumed that he had been hawked
Or had an accident and died. So as part
Of the sport I placed him in the past and
Went on with what was required of me
As a committed membe.

Then one day I received communications
From a vet within some miles from my
Home enquiring if I had lost a pigeon or
Knew of anyone who had. Following
Our conversation I drove to the vets
And upon presentation of the birds
Ring number I became aware that
He was definitely my grizzle.

I was informed that his wing was
Broken and the person who found
Him strolling along a country road
Lifted him and drove to the vets.
Upon recall I had liberated the
Pigeons 22 miles from their loft
Up a mountain and I wondered
How many miles did he stroll?

Oh, I’ll never know but here via
A photograph is ‘Broken Wing’
And yours truly, but alas, I regret
That I am no longer a member
Of a great sport and here’s to
‘Broken Wing’!


Scheme AXXBCXD EXXXXAX XCXDFXXX XXXFGXBX GDXXED
Poetic Form
Metre 1 010101100100 11111011 110101101 11010001001 0111110111 1110101 0010110 10100101011 110101101 10111111 11110001111 1011110010 1111101011 100101 1111010010 101011111 1111110101 111011100 1001011101 001010101 110101011 111000110 11011111 10001011 110010101 10101101 011111000 101111 10100110 1101111 111011110 0101101 0110101101 111110010 1011011 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,205
Words 238
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 8, 8, 6
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 192
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on September 11, 2018

Modified on March 14, 2023

1:11 min read
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Liam Ó Comain

An Irish poet now living in Derry City but originally from Limavady in County Derry in the north of the Island. more…

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