Analysis of My race



To well meaning voices and mockers alike
Who scream to my heart "give chase"
For this truth I implore, do brace.

Your alarm clocks of me misplace
For the flower which calls my body its vase
Will not be hurried to bloom.

My truth as prickly as a rose
From shame I have retraced to embrace
Reputation and Opinions, I command you Displace!
And give way and room for grace!

For you see, this is my space
With a destiny assured within this trace.
So relax, I pray...
This is my race, to run at my pace.

- laulindah
#thehundredth.


Scheme XAA AAX XAAA AAXA XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110100101 1111111 11110111 10111101 10101111011 1111011 11110101 111101101 0100010101101 0110111 1111111 10100010111 10111 111111111 1 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 519
Words 101
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted by #thehundredth on August 20, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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