Analysis of The Senses Of Us.



I love a world,
Just like yours.
I feel…
Feel I'm wise,
Which I must not do.

I look upon you,
Thinking I'm full.
With daily moves
I see..
See the world.

Different from yours,
Colors of enlightenment,
Colors of the night,
The beauty of nothing.

I touch...
I touch your emotions.
As it comes unleashed,
Touching my feelings,
Creating everlasting waves

I hear...
hear the sound of your love.
It comes fast as misunderstanding,
Changing the views of a non lover.

I smell...
Smell the ways of your keeping.
The aura of you, is hidden.
The greatness of you stays.
You are art,
With your changing lies.

Holding me, so dearly
With my unusual tohweh. (Did not know what word you want here)
Our life live together,
In shadows, regrets.

Living, from weak moments,
For days, never to come,
For things, never to change.
I'm fully more him.

Wanting to be him,
My life speculates.
For a thrusting change,
I relax if it stays.

Since it is never a dream,
 I feel it is where I am.
I might be your feelings,
You might not know.

Experiencing an outer life,
Different from yours.
But you hold,
The senses of us.


Scheme abxcd dxxea Bxxf xxxgx hxfi xfxjxc ehix xxkl lxkj xxgx xBxx
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 111 11 111 11111 11011 1011 1101 11 101 10011 1010100 10101 010110 11 111010 11101 10110 0100101 11 101111 11110010 100110110 11 1011110 01011110 010111 111 11101 101110 11010111111111 1011010 0101 101110 111011 111011 11011 10111 1110 10101 101111 1111001 1111111 111110 1111 010001101 10011 111 01011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,045
Words 201
Sentences 26
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 5, 4, 6, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 49
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by Theme on June 16, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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