Analysis of Killers

Carl Sandburg 1878 (Galesburg) – 1967 (Flat Rock)



I am singing to you
Soft as a man with a dead child speaks;
Hard as a man in handcuffs,
Held where he cannot move:

Under the sun
Are sixteen million men,
Chosen for shining teeth,
Sharp eyes, hard legs,
And a running of young warm blood in their wrists.

And a red juice runs on the green grass;
And a red juice soaks the dark soil.
And the sixteen million are killing. . . and killing
and killing.

I never forget them day or night:
They beat on my head for memory of them;
They pound on my heart and I cry back to them,
To their homes and women, dreams and games.

I wake in the night and smell the trenches,
And hear the low stir of sleepers in lines--
Sixteen million sleepers and pickets in the dark:
Some of them long sleepers for always,
Some of them tumbling to sleep to-morrow for always,
Fixed in the drag of the world's heartbreak,
Eating and drinking, toiling. . . on a long job of
killing.
Sixteen million men.


Scheme XXXX XAXXX XXBB XCCX XXXDDXXBA
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 110110111 110101 111101 1001 101101 101101 1111 00101111011 001111011 00111011 000110110010 010 110011111 11111110011 11111011111 111010101 1100101010 0101111001 011010010001 11111011 1111001111011 10011011 100101010111 10 01101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 903
Words 177
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4, 9
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Carl Sandburg

Carl Sandburg was an American writer and editor best known for poetry. more…

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