Analysis of Quit Lives



One in a million times
I'm a bottled black dime
Coasting in my touch
Never to let it rust
Fields covered dust
Come, come and love me like the walls walked through the windows blew
Real covered lust, don't let me listen
Is like most of us so fooled
Once in a million times
I'm a bottled black dime
Drifted my heels, never meant so real
Keeping it right, whispering your life to kneel with just one kiss always will miss.


Scheme aBcddefgaBhi
Poetic Form
Metre 100101 101011 10011 101111 1101 11011101110101 110111110 1111111 100101 101011 101110111 101110011111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 408
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 331
Words per stanza (avg) 81
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Submitted by drose00 on March 05, 2018

Modified on March 14, 2023

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