Analysis of Illumination II



illumination through a blessed brigade
to bask in the great expanse between time & space
equate logic for love swept underneath the rug
pulling teeth out in the street with dancing feet
love is in action to what we can fashion
it's as simple as asking in your visitation
columns of piers shelter through my fears
we must embrace this time of love's design
each new day is a stepping stone falling headlong alone
love can reach the tender heart to impart

listen to the wind the wind of my soul
hearts torn in ambition through its restitution
do you all know what you are doing
through varied trials and tribulations
one must never be faking
time heals wounds
yet time waits for no one
let us stand as one to be honored as one
each of us has been given a choice
we roll in a voice of simplicity


Scheme XXXXAAXXXX XABXBXAAXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 001010101 11001010111 01101110101 10110011101 11010111110 111011001010 101110111 1101111101 1111010110101 1110101101 1010101111 11001011010 111111110 110100010 1110110 111 111111 11111111011 111111001 1100110100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 777
Words 150
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 10
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 321
Words per stanza (avg) 75
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Submitted by hitalot on January 13, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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