Analysis of Rhymes Locked Right



Rhymes Locked Right

ain't know love in this Mother Fucker
when you put me to the test you'll get a fist
not going to stop until you drop there will be no tears in the end
took my pistol off then cocked it making my way about my business
they'll be no witnesses to this homicide
I know this Mother Fucking game is locked
wait I got to pray but he put his hands in my face
stay true to yourself Fuck the dumb shit
you think I'm under a lot of pressure
some say life has no meaning no meaning
we were all born to die so stay your screaming
mean while on the South Side of town
rolling through the mother fucking hood what do you see
now we got to deal with the survival things
never cracked under pressure cause i was raised for combat
never mother fucking love for fools cause you sing the blues
recognize a real G from the streets
rap us up a fatty cause we got to keep this game swing
leave you stomach open to keep your case chosen

one, two, three
one, two, three..
sitting at the stop light looking at Ho's
roll out to the bitch to say what's up
gave her some game now I  got that bitch
called me hommie told my hommies its on
got a few honey's say they want to moan
now there bringing weed sit back & follow my lead
hung up the horn & the horn was alive
take one of those bitches to the slaughter hole
told my hommie play it down cause your acting like a fool
I grabbed her ass in the back & she hit me alive
believe me when your down at your pad
hoping that you won't loose your cool
we can roll to see the sights take down tonight
an open and shut situation
cop got capped they want to change the situation
vibration, temptation aggravation
boys got a magazine yet don't know how to act
hommies make me sick sucking on the devil's dick
can't stop blowing up the charts tight

stay alone starring at my room looking at candles
at night I can't sleep but I got my candle stick burning
cause the hommies that I thought I had
use their money for their new cribs
day by day is impossible to cope
think that i'm the one doing dope
one time for you mother Fucking mind
roll my top in my hard hat
I'm not your average mother Fucker
chained through the slave got these rhymes locked right


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 111011010 11111011101 11011011111111001 11101111101101110 1111001110 1111010111 1111111111011 111011011 1111001110 1111110110 10111111110 11101111 1010101011111 11111100101 10110101111110 10101011111101 10011101 11101011111111 111010111110 111 111 1010111011 111011111 101111111 11111111 101111111 11101111011 110101101 11111010101 1111111110101 110100111101 011111111 10111111 11111011101 11001010 11111110010 010010010 11010111111 11111010101 11101011 1011011110110 11111111110110 10111111 11101111 1111010011 11101101 111110101 1110111 1111001010 110111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,218
Words 450
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 19, 21, 10
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 443
Words per stanza (avg) 109
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Submitted by hitalot on December 18, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:15 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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