Analysis of Conscious Love Response



we look inside to dig deeper then ever before
 a willingness by which to explore so much more
 love is all around us as if hope springs a new
 many have bitten off far more then they could ever chew
 solace is branded by ivy thorns on the impulse of love
 brevity is still deep inside of me when I have time alone
 to wait in the parlor for a sweet word of enjoyment
 the favorable response to its duration and plight
 forget the night and the day is far well spent
 as if gravity is still deep inside of me but I hide from thee
 quietness in a walk through the woods
 look at the Willow tree wave its tender branches
 in certain traces we get spaces in ordinary places
 conscious response to love
 to embark on a pivotal point of existence learn to shun its resistance
 out of every circumstance learn to take part in life's dance
 there are various trials to shape your character into being in the moment

love has united the masses with vested chances
 love is the union between man & wife
 love is in the moment as you gaze into its light
 many have departed from its sight giving up on the fight
 the human creature is vast in there intellect
 a great cause to wait upon such a love
 how you have fought so hard and fierce
 my truest love is gone from here
 a challenge to be free is a question of time
 my one solution is using my mind
 living on the edge and its going to my head
 sitting up at night all alone in bed
 following the rainbow to the sky
 I see a vision of you pass me by
 Our war were in is almost over
 It's so hard to believe I lost my lover

love has gained it also has lost humanities heaviest of cost
 yet still dig deep then ever before onto the duration of Agape love
 brotherly love to love in a praise of thanks to your fellow man
 let the reader understand everyone has love just have to tap into it
 from that of space and time we shall shine
 the love of your neighbor greater then your self
 greater love has the man that lays down their life for a friend
 a love sought to depend upon day by day
 amidst the barren cliffs hero's glare
 through the soul in flight as it permeates matters of the heart
 In Autumn as the leaves turn each leaf is symbolic
 breathe deep


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111011001 010011101111 111011111101 10110111111101 101101101101011 1001110111111101 11001010111010 01000011111001 01010011111 11100111011111111 100001101 11011111010 010101110010010 100111 10110100110101111010 11100101111011 111001011110001100010 1101001011010 110100111 1100101110111 101010111101101 01010110110 0111101101 11111101 11011111 010111101011 1101011011 101010110111 1011110101 10001101 1101011111 101001110 11110111110 11111011010010011 1111110011001101011 1001110011111101 10100110111111011 111101111 01111010111 10110111111101 01110101111 010101101 10101111010101 0101011111010 11
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,177
Words 431
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 17, 16, 12
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 579
Words per stanza (avg) 143
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Submitted by hitalot on October 25, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:09 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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