Analysis of We Make Or Break Our Reality



We Make Or Break Our Reality

you have lit the spark that ignited the inner flame to what I was waiting for
 a thought is just that a thought if not put to use
 one must percieve it in their minds first in order to achieve it
 we all seek for truth in this life just some of us search in a garbage can
 the mind is filled as in a lost mouse in a maze

if we put are heads together we can achieve much
 in a society today in such a rush
 one can't find themselves unless they have a personal relationship with their creator
 We can wear a face as in a facade
 We can front our body's to be thrown at Satan's will
 Each of us is responsible for the decisions we make in this life

Therefore gain wisdom & with all thy getting gain understanding
 pray with all of your might through the power of the spirit
 look above to the heavenly love
 merciful one come take this chip off my shoulder
 Stop the hate & fighting as our society grows a bit colder
 only one life will soon be passed only what's done out of love will last

No one in this life gets by on any free pass
 we must make a great decision to believe in a power greater then self
 perhaps you want to put that book right back on the shelf
 but faith without works is dead
 what is going on inside our heads
 it's the blind leading the blind and soon going to fall into the ditch

Cheer up my brother for God alone is enough
 don't need a sports car or a night at your local bar
 Keep your head up & smile
 Cause you know all the great while
 Love will soon make a comeback
 It's quite all right to believe in that


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,588
Words 323
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 207
Words per stanza (avg) 53
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Submitted by hitalot on August 20, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:36 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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