Analysis of Gothic Demonic Illusion



Gothic Demonic Illusion
out of the depths of the earth there lies a swell
of a great story I'd like to tell
to delve into the midnight madness of the bowels of Hell
your body lies frozen in time
Sublime
the casket is slowly lowered into the ground
you are locked as you awake to demonic bites
viscous long hanging fangs dripping blood off side
you close your eyes again want to run away to hide
now it's just you & Satan going on for a ride
bowels of hot sulfur & radiated fires of impulses
your very soul is a loose tonic in the beverage of death
blackened stench with skulls surrounding you
the immense screams of torments in weeping, wailing & gnashing
minds plugged in eternal destruction

a hole in the center of the vast formation leading to fire
intense agony as you gasp to take a breath
eyes with holes having spots with tombstones in brain
no chance at turning back you are now captured in Hell
the billows of hot lava scorch your gait
a deep odor of sewage permeates through the vast domain
your heart explodes into the corrupted way of the damned
Satan laughing spreads his wings in flight
gross premonition of demonic henchmen doing his bidding
liquefied fragments of death launched at you
screams of pain staking patrons under garb of evil
walls of vast petrified extreme with bats over head
the walking dead of sinners marching to their doom
666
When will this madness end ?


Scheme ABBBCCXXDDDXEFGA XEHBXHXXGFXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10010010 11011011101 101101111 11010110101011 11011001 01 010110100101 111110110101 10110110111 1111011110111 111110101101 101110100101100 1101101100010011 101110101 0011110101010 110010010 01001010101010110 011001111101 1111011101 1111011111001 0101110111 01101101010101 11010100101101 101011101 1001010101010110 101011111 1111010101110 111100111101 010111010111 1 111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,381
Words 255
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 15
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 570
Words per stanza (avg) 127
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Submitted by hitalot on August 07, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:16 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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