Analysis of Spring (Double Rondelet Triolet)



With a deep touch,
The red poppy awakes the grass.
With a deep touch,
Red wants Green's vibration so much,
The sun awakes the sky's watch glass.
The sky vibrates like a string bass,
With a deep touch.

The red flowers bloom in the Spring
When the time of the green grass comes.
Blue sky vibrates like a bass string.
Fresh, red flowers bloom in the Spring.
I see the nature's purest swing.
The wind searches his bongo drums,
The red flowers bloom in the Spring
When the time of the green grass comes.

I see His love
Like a white lily among thorns.
I see His love
Like in clefts of the rock, a dove.
When red flower its grass adorns
And her dead Winter, Spring mourns,
I see His love.

Shadows are inlaid in color

When red poppy awakes the grass.

When the land is multicolour,

Shadows are inlaid in color.

When the cuckoo is a caller,

The sun awakes the sky's watch glass.

Shadows are inlaid in color

When red poppy awakes the grass.


Scheme AbAaBbA CDcccdCD EfEeffE G B g G g B G B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1011 0110101 1011 11101011 0110111 01101011 1011 01101001 10110111 11101011 11101001 11010101 0110111 01101001 10110111 1111 10110011 1111 10110101 11101101 0011011 1111 111010 1110101 10111 111010 1011010 0110111 111010 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 931
Words 181
Sentences 15
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 7, 8, 7, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by Marieta on July 07, 2017

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Marieta Maglas

Ardus Publications, Sybaritic Press, Prolific Press, Silver Birch Press, HerEthics Books, and some others published the poems of Marieta Maglas in anthologies like Tanka Journal , Three Line Poetry #25, Three Line Poetry #39 edited by Glenn Lyvers, The Aquillrelle Wall of Poetry edited by Yossi Faybish, A Divine Madness edited by John Patrick Boutilier, Near Kin edited by Marie Lecrivain, ENCHANTED - Love Poems and Abstract Art edited by Gabrielle de la Fair, Intercontinental Anthology edited by Madan Gandhi, and Nancy Drew Anthology edited by Melanie Villines. Her poems have been also published in journals like Poeticdiversity, I Am not a Silent Poet, Our Poetry Corner, and Antarctica Journal. more…

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