Analysis of The Rock



In the avenues of thought you stirred up ripples
And waves, and raised all the dust that had settled
On everything that sat within the circumference
Of a space between two meanings
A tale of two cities

And stared down the twin barrel of ill fate
While the large jawed kings of your time
And the plain faced queens of circumstance
Searched for deeper meaning in their alleged souls

Upon a time, standing upon a place of memories
Which time had mugged and murdered
And killed half the things you had treasured
Questions led to answers
And the answers to more questions
If it was a match you would have known
You were no match
So you threw in the towel and quit trying

And mumbled an unrepeatable obscenity
And offered your toil tortured middle finger
And cussed out an irrevocable infinity

A man with two legs and a crutch, clasping
A pair of blistered hands, clutching
A collection of mirrors containing the images
Of a man who fit that exact description
Whose eyes stared into far spaces
A man crippled and crumbling
Whose feet stomped in lanky paces
Upon a path at half past forgotten
And all the large jawed kings of time
And all the plain faced queens of circumstance

In the wake of all the drama that began to unfold
You caught yourself fumbling in half steps
Afraid and cold, feeling suddenly old
To the rhythm of a heart that beat in half measures
And the sign said - Closed because of weather
From which you derived no pleasure

In the shadow of memory, upon a time of plenty
You lingered upon feasts once partaken
Where the sun had shone bright on many
In a sea of plenty you had nothing, life dilapidated
It was there, you would have sworn to it
It was there, this fact, as you had known it
Handled by those hands, of own eyes obligated

Incandescence shines through this dullness
Lights up the passages of time and allows us
To pass through and to pass up opportunities
To lose our ways in the vast perpetuity

Where silence raged with the raw tonnage
Of a boundless herd of oceanic waves

And speech and noise went unheard and unheeded
The matters which mattered were sealed and hidden
Clusters of mutterings staggered and settled
And in settling, died and gathered dust
Much as they do now. Much as they did now

In the end we clung to the branches of abstracts
Something hidden to the eyes but open to the mind
Let the reader understand, the rock on which I stand


Scheme XAXXB XCDX BEEFXGXH IJI HHKLKHXLCD MXMFJJ IGINOON PPBI XX NLAXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 00101111110 01011011110 11011010010 10101110 011110 0110110111 10111111 00111110 11101001011 01011001011100 1111010 011011110 101110 00101110 111011111 1011 11100100110 010110100 01011101010 0111010000100 011110011 01110110 00101100100100 10111101010 11101110 01100100 11101010 0101111010 01011111 010111110 00111010101101 1101100011 0101101001 1010101110110 0011101110 11101110 00111000101110 11001111 101111110 001110111010100 111111111 1111111111 10111111100 111110 110100110011 11101110100 111010010100 110110110 1010110101 01011010010 01011001010 10110010010 0010010101 1111111111 001111010110 1010101110101 101001011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,322
Words 436
Sentences 2
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 8, 3, 10, 6, 7, 4, 2, 5, 3
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 175
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted by hitalot on June 27, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:10 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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