Analysis of I forbear to sleep the dawns and embrace the time



Three thirty at dawn
Time has woken me up
Addressing my heart
I can see her
I know the innocent being looking at me lovingly
Effusively and desirably
Void and the loneliness
Is that common to all the things
Visible and invisible
My drowsy eyes, waiting for the answer
To sleep
Despite behavioral weakness of my eyes
My mind is active and ever young
Never enjoying looking at the weeping time
The time always declares the meaning of life
It is not only loving the world
Also giving something valuable
Invisible time whispering the message lovingly
I cannot wait any longer until her eyes getting wet
I embrace time appreciating her great service


Scheme ABCDEEFGHDIJKLMNHEOF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Metre 11011 111011 01011 1110 110100101011100 010001 100100 11101101 10000100 1101101010 11 01010010111 111100101 100101010101 0110101011 111101001 101010100 01001100010100 110110100101101 101101000110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 625
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 531
Words per stanza (avg) 113
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Submitted on April 25, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sunil Algama

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