Analysis of Without A Title

Boris Pasternak 1890 (Moscow) – 1960 (Peredelkino)



So aloof, so meek in your ways,
Now you're fire, you're pure combustion.
Only let me lock up your beauty
Deep, deep down in a poem's dungeon.

See how wholly transformed they are
By the fire in the glowing lampshade;
Edge of wall, edge of window-pane,
Our own figures and our own shadows.

There you sit on cushions, apart,
Legs tucked under you, Turkish fashion.
In the light or in the shadow,
Childlike, always, the way you reason.

Dreaming, now you thread on a string
Beads that lie on your lap in profusion.
Far too sad is your mien, too artless
Is the drift of your conversation.

Yes, love's truly a vulgar word.
I'll invent something else to supplant it,
Just for you, the whole world, all words
I will gladly rename, if you want it.

Can your sorrowful mien convey
All your hidden orebearing richness,
All that radiant seam of your heart?
Why d'you fill your eyes with such sadness?


Scheme ABCB XCXX DBXB XBAB XEXE XFDF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 10111011 111011010 101111110 11100110 11100111 101000101 11111101 1011001011 11111001 111011010 0011001 1101110 10111101 1111110010 11111111 10111010 11100101 1011011011 11101111 1110011111 11100101 1110110 111001111 1111111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 871
Words 163
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Boris Pasternak

Boris Leonidovich Pasternak was a Russian poet, novelist, and literary translator. more…

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