Analysis of Like a star, booming in the sky



Nae spirit child could e’er say wi’ such Buddha brevity,
                      Daddy, I can’t believe I’m real
    Like a star, booming in the sky, I watched him fly
                         An exclamation of joy

Me oh my!

Ne’er pure child o’ creation could bett’r say
                      Wi’ such nihilistic fantasy
                                  Watch me fly
            Like a butterfly fluttering by, I watched him fly

Me oh my!

Nae wan child could e’er say
                  Wi’ such sweet an’ soulful simplicity
                       Daddy, I can’t believe I’m real
                    I’m like a star, booming in the sky

Me oh my!

But what is real?
                                      Don’t even try
                             For truth is only in the eye
                         Of the Watch me fly beholder

Me oh my!


Scheme aBcx C dacc C daBc C bccx C
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 11011111110100 10110111 101100011111 101011 111 1111010111 111100 111 101010011111 111 111111 1111100100 10110111 110110001 111 1111 1101 11110001 10111010 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,088
Words 113
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by Rustybuckets on November 01, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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