Analysis of The Music Stops



The jaws sing
As the drip, drip, drip,
Of the petroleum chorus
Dances across
The inverted aluminum
And the hissing starts
And the hissing stays
Its smell a warning
A final omen
Like the last rose
Of summer
Or the fragrance she wore
For that final goodbye
The teeth tear inward
Like the regret for today
And the regret for yesterday
And the lament for tomorrow
Its promise broken
And your khakis red
And baptized
A stigmata
To self infliction
As the music plays constant
And the rushing you feel
An emptying of sorrow
Onto the crushed ceiling
Of a dream in reverse
Of all life in reverse
Until two arms grab you
And you fall from the sky
And you fall from the sky
Waiting
For the ground
To coronate the outcome
And for one more answer
To a ‘why’ unquestioned
And to love you one more time
But the lights are now dim
And the voices muffled
As an organ can be heard
And store bought flowers smelled
As an old woman cries…
And a young woman cries…
And a stranger pronounces
What you feared the most
They didn’t know you
And couldn’t know you
The exit sign flashing
But there is no door
“There is no door”
—and then the music stops

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2016)


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Poetic Form
Metre 011 10111 10010010 1001 00100100 00101 00101 11010 01010 1011 110 101011 11101 01110 1001101 0001110 0001101 11010 01101 001 0010 11010 1010110 001011 1100110 100110 101001 111001 011111 011101 011101 10 101 1101 011110 101010 0111111 101111 001010 1110111 011101 111101 001101 0010010 11101 1111 0111 010110 11111 1111 010101 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,133
Words 219
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 51, 1
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 465
Words per stanza (avg) 110
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on June 28, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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