Analysis of Here a riddle has drawn a strange nailmark

Boris Pasternak 1890 (Moscow) – 1960 (Peredelkino)



Here a riddle has drawn a strange nailmark. To sleep now!
I'll reread, understand with the light of the sun,
But until I am wakened, to touch the beloved
As I do has been given to none.

How I touched you! So touched were you even by the copper
Of my lips, as an audience is touched by a play,
And the kiss was like summer; it lingered and lingered,
Only later the thunderstorm came.

And I drank in long draughts, like the birds, half-unconscious.
The stars trickle slowly through the throat to the crop,
While the nightingales roll up their eyes in a shudder
From the firmament draining the night drop by drop.


Scheme XAXA BXXX XCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 101011011111 11101101101 10111111001 111111011 11111101101010 1111110011101 0011110110010 10100101 011011101110 011010101101 10111110010 1011001111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 607
Words 116
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Boris Pasternak

Boris Leonidovich Pasternak was a Russian poet, novelist, and literary translator. more…

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