Analysis of Soulless But Conjoined
You stir it one way, and they the other,
but the pot stays just as hot
You attack their motives, and they attack yours,
while the mixture boils and rots
“It needs to be this way”… the other side revolts,
your mind ‘faulty’ with avarice and greed
The pot has simmered, the broth is thick,
and its bottom not easy to see
With spoon or fork, its offering slick,
when the bowls come out at noon
A mutual exclusion, first left then right,
neither motive heaven known
In single file, day turns to night,
talking points with nothing said
Both cupboards bare, a rat within,
guarding a piece of old stale bread
When the final story is written and told,
of what in concert you destroyed
A drum will beat, zero-sum complete,
leaving you soulless, but conjoined
(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2016)
Scheme | XX XX XX AX AB CX CD XD XX XX B |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111101010 1011111 10111001011 1010101 111111010101 1110110001 011100111 011011011 111111001 1011111 01000101111 1010101 01011111 1011101 11010101 10011111 10101011001 11010101 011110101 1011011 0100101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 776 |
Words | 141 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 56 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 13 |
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