Analysis of Nellie's Lament for the Pirnhouse Cat

Ellen Johnston 1835 (Hamilton) – 1874 (Glasgow)



Killed by the Elevator, C----e Factory, Dundee

Oh ! fare-ye-weel my bonnie cat,
Nae mair I'll smooth yer skin sae black.
Mony a time I stroked yer back,
Puir wee creator;
Ye've gane yer last lang sleep tae tak’
The Elevator

Has sent ye aff tae your lang hame,
Whaur hunger ne'er will jag yer wame,
Whaur ye shall ne'er put in a claim
For meal or milk ;
Yer in the ' pond,' free frae a' blame,
Boiled like a whelk.

Puir hapless beast, what was't that took
Ye hunting into yon dark nook?
Whaur ' Death ' sat cooring wi' his hook
Tae nip yer neck.
I'll think upon yer deein' look
Wi' sad respect.

My very brain ran roon about
When I saw Archie tak' ye oot,
Wi' scalped pow and bluidy snoot.
Heigh, when I think,
A stane tied roon yer neck, nae doot
Tae gar ye sink.

Jist yesterday, my bonnie beast,
I held ye close unto my breast ;
When, ye as proud as ony priest,
Did cock yer lug;
Syne aff ye ran tae get a feast
Frae yer milk mug.

But noo nae mair in oor pirnhouse
Ye'll hunt the rats, nor catch a moose,
Nor on the counter sit fu' douse,
And mew and yell,
And shoot yer humph sae prude and spruce
At rhyming Nell.

Your race upon the earth was ran,
Puir puss, ere it was weel began ;
Ye've gane whaur beastie, boy, and man
Are doomed tae go.
Omnipotence in His vast plan
Ordained it so.

There's nane has deign'd tae mourn ye here,
Unless mysel' wi' grief sincere;
Though but a cat I'll still revere
Thy worth wi' pity,
And ower yer memory drap a tear,
Puir we cheetie.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101001110001 11111101 11111111 10011111 11010 111111111 0100 11111111 11011111 11111001 1111 10011101 1101 110111111 11001111 1111111 1111 1101111 1101 11011101 11110111 111011 1111 01111111 1111 1101101 11111011 1111111 1111 11111101 1111 1111011 11011101 11010111 0101 01111101 1101 11010111 11111101 111110101 1111 01000111 0111 11111111 0111101 11011101 11110 011100101 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,463
Words 290
Sentences 13
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 49
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by Madeleine Quinn on June 18, 2016

Modified on May 03, 2023

1:29 min read
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Ellen Johnston

Ellen Johnston known as "The Factory Girl" (c.1835 – April 12, 1874) was a Scottish power-loom weaver and poet. She is known because of her autobiography and later reevaluations of her working class poetry. more…

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