Analysis of Smile Sister | KulDeep Sharma | Short Poem For My Sister



Poem: Smile Sister
Writer: KulDeep Sharma

YoGita Jesi Dekhi Thi Zindgi Ki Raah Me
Pata Nahi Khuda Ko Isi Raste Me Bhejana Tha,
Jaha Mera Aana Jana Tha
Pahli Mulakat Hi Esi Thi Anjan Nikale,
But Bahut Smile Leke Nikale
Dushman Bhi Dar Gaye Smile Se
Hathiyar Gir Gaye Fisal Kar
Zami Par.
Khuda Se Pucha,
Koi Jawab Nahi Mila,
Pata Tha Bejuban Hai,
Ye Pata Nahi Kab Bolega,
Khud Se Hi Puch Liya,
Pata Hai Dil Kya Bola?
Tere Bahana Hai,
Same 2 Same YoGita.

Writer: KulDeep Sharma
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Scheme aB xccddxaxxdefxbex Bf
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10110 10110 11111111 111111111 111101 1111111 11111 111111 11111 11 111 1111 1111 11111 11111 111110 111 111 10110 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 486
Words 92
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 16, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Modified on April 28, 2023

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KulDeep Sharma

Birth Name: KulDeep Sharma Born 1 September 1994 Beawar, Rajasthan, India Genres: Hindi/ Punjabi/ Rajasthani Rapping, Freestyle Rapping, Fast & Slow Rapping. Occupations: Rap Song Singer (Rapper), Web Designer, Hindi /Punjabi/ Rajasthani/ Marwadi Song Lyricist, Video Songs Story Writer, Poetry Writer, Story Writer. more…

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