Analysis of The 'Mary Ross'



'What was the hardest hour’, you ask,   
 ‘Ever I had at sea?’   
There was that in the wreck of the Mary Ross   
 Is bitten into me.   

Five merry weeks of sun and speed,           
 A ship well mann’d and stout—   
One hour from home she falter’d, stopp’d   
 Short … and the lights went out.   

What follow’d—O just-dealing God,   
 How firm must be Thy mind,           
Such a beginning to have given   
 And such an end design’d!   

…Sudden, from human eyes and hands   
 And kindred human breath,   
Into the wild black Void, into           
 The unthought-on fangs of Death…   

…The bitter cold was all—then breath   
 Again, and something cross’d   
My clutching fingers; with a spar   
 Now was I driven and toss’d.           

Where were the rest? My strain’d ear caught   
 No answer … Dazed and stark,   
Moments it may have been, or hours,   
 Dash’d thro’ the roaring dark.   

I thought that I must have traversed Time           
 And touch’d Eternity,   
When, high in the air, a cry, a wail:   
 ‘I am afraid! Save me!’   

And yonder!—Oh what ’s that blacker black   
 Bulged out upon the gloom?           
By the glint of the whirling spray I saw   
 Her lifted stern-post loom.   

‘Save me!’ Oh what ’s yon whiter speck   
 O’er the yeasty glimmer wild?   
Terribly flashed the hasty moon           
 On—the face of a little child!   

Back chased the blessed dark—but, oh!   
 I’d seen! Aye, all too clear   
I see her still—the piteous mouth,   
 The great eyes fixt with fear.           

Not an hour since upon my knee   
 Her good-night pranks were play’d,   
And now—to face Death … and alone…   
 God! and afraid? ‘Afraid!’   

Oh, I cried from the trough—I promised her           
 The help that I could not give.   
The wind drove back my words—the waves   
 Drove on their fugitive.   

‘Somebody save me!’ And again   
 For one mad second’s space,           
’Mid the rushing rack the quiet moon,   
 ’Mid the wide void, that face!   

And she saw me! Great Heaven, she smiled!   
 Stretch’d out her arms and cried,   
‘Save me!’ and half my name—and then…           
 Then she was pacified.   

For … a swirl … a suck … when next I rose,   
 Naught, save the stormy roar!   
Down in the darkness I thank’d God.   
 She was afraid no more.


Scheme XAXA BCBC DXXB XEXE EBXB XFXF XAXA XGXG XHIH XJXJ ABXX XKXK LMIM HNLN XODO
Poetic Form Quatrain  (93%)
Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (22%)
Metre 110101011 101111 11100110101 110011 11011101 011101 11011111 100111 1111101 111111 100101110 01111 10110101 010101 01011101 011111 01011111 010101 11010101 1111001 10011111 110101 101111110 110101 111111101 010100 110010101 110111 0101111101 110101 1011010111 010111 111111101 101101 10010101 10110101 1101111 111111 1101011 011111 111010111 011101 01111001 100101 1111011100 0111111 01111101 111100 1011001 111101 101010101 101111 011111011 110101 11011101 11110 101011111 110101 10010111 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,350
Words 376
Sentences 33
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:52 min read
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Blanche Edith Baughan

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