Analysis of The Mystical Journey



What we are offered from beyond
Is an entrance to eternity,
Seeded from within the latter
To ensure the growth of the spiritual.

Like all of existence containing the
Product of truth  
Because of the love of another
Whose nature is truth.

A giver of oneself who loves to help
Others to ensure the realization
Of peace, joy, love and beauty,
In the mystical land whose produce
Arises from the seed of love.

Peruse the book of life and gather
From the contents of our creation.
Confirmation will bloom like a rose
Emphasising love is here, is there, is
Everywhere, in fact it is all that matters!

The divine fruit containing the ingredients
Of life, of peace, of joy, in fact of existence….


Scheme XABX XCBC XDAXX BDXXX XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110101 111010100 10101010 10101101000 1110100100 1011 011011010 11011 010111111 1010101010 1111010 001001101 01010111 010111010 1010110010 01011101 1111111 1001111110 001101000100 111111011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 680
Words 123
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on February 18, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Liam Ó Comáin

An Irish poet now living in Derry City but originally from Limavady in County Derry in the north of the Island. more…

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