Analysis of The Dying Fire



Love started a whisper, an ember burning slow

Skin touched softly, hearts entwined, tangled souls

Passions flames spread tearing across their world

Its frenzy slowly dwindled a rampant crashing sea gave way to an ocean serene

Calmly the fire burns steady

Passion lost within time

He longs for her touch, for the passion in her eyes

Wanting to cry like a child at her bosom for something loved and lost, he lies awake at night

Tears are in his eyes

He fears he has failed her

He fears her fire is dying


Scheme X X X X X X A X A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 110010110101 1110101101 1011100111 110101001010111111001 10010110 101011 111011010001 10111011010110101110111 11011 111110 11010110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 502
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by nicholasb on February 16, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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