Analysis of Incompletion



Dont think you can Escape me
foR i am thE air with which you breathe
preSSing down down
you are nothIng
why are yOu loNely?
i am always here.

dont pretend to be hAppy
who do you thiNk you are?
i will make you eXplode
I can't breathE
or am i breathing Too much?
overwhelmed
whY cant i control myself?

today is a good day
i am as happy as can Be
good frIends good life good family
i hope you die
you are nothing
you will never know Peace
my emOtions are aLl over the plAce
isnt that hilaRious?

maybe theres nothing wrong with me
maybe its just you three.


Scheme abxCax axxbxxx xaaxCxxx aa
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 111011111 1011 1110 11110 1111 1011110 111111 111101 111 1111011 01 111011 011011 11110111 11111100 1111 1110 111011 1010111001 110100 10110111 101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 530
Words 111
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 8, 2
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on December 10, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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