Analysis of Here Is To The Women Who Hurt!



Here is to the women who hurt!

How their pain never told
though their stories ever sold,
intuitively resistant and bold.

Their very dignity drained like dirty waters in streams,
their very hope and essence gone as theirs dreams.

Where's the crag to fortify the weaker vessels
Without whom they say no man excels?

Who feels their pains from pangs of birth
through their silent cries that leads them onto slow death?
Yet still they walk the very valleys and mountainous regions with the beam of joy on their faces,
being so pretentious one can hardly imagine the pangs of distress covering their heart like the oasis.

Here is to the women who fight at night all by themselves,
yet still walk their head high price tagged off the shelves.

Here is to the women who can visualise the rainbow before it appears and the sun before it rises and the moon before it beams and the stars before it shines.

I see but fighters fiercely in battle with all but the world, estranged by wild beast sometimes referred to as men.

Yet still like real Amazonian would strike both man and beast,
with the vengeance of God to overestimate the least,
even with one breast behold their armor and a breastplate fix.

If you can't beat them join them is the mantra, or is it so late?

Varieties in their making,
impurities in their makeup,
uncertainties in their fake up
but by reflections of their maker,
love none comparable to neither
seen, heard nor spoken of either.

Who then is needed before or after them?
They fight their own fights,
and that of children's plights,
putting man's bravado to flight.

So now they can wipe their own tears, so now we can right their own fears, from now to ever in years.

Hats off! We bow, we salute and raise our eyes to heaven through tinted glasses, dreams firmly held in hands of steel glasses.

Toast! Here is to the women who hurt!"

-by EMTSBA III

(Written in appreciation of the exemplary fighting spirit of women around the world, whilst watching the war report on Syria - October 2013. Revised January 2014)

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Poetic Form
Metre 11101011 111101 1110101 0100001001 11010011101001 11010101111 10111001010 011111101 11111111 111011111011 111101010010010101111110 1010101110010011011001110010 11101011111101 11111111101 11101011101011010010111000101110010111 111101001011101011110101111 11110100111101 101011101001 10111011100011 1111111101011111 01000110 0100011 01000111 110101110 111000110 11110110 11110011101 11111 011101 10101011 11111111111111111111001 111110101101110110101101011110 111101011 111 1000010100100101011001011100101110001001100 10111010
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 2,063
Words 371
Sentences 22
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 2, 2, 4, 2, 1, 1, 3, 1, 6, 4, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by EMTSBA III on October 29, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

1:52 min read
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EMTSBA III

EMTSBA III is a man who has 9 lives and lives like a cat; for three he fights, for three he laughs, for three he writes! He has the writing reflex, or so they say. His early formative years spent travelling different countries, living in a multilingual household and growing up among a dozen of other languages and nationalities, diversity in culture will later influence his interest in Personal Development, Community Outreach and Social Commentary. That journey took him through 3 continents and over 50 cities exploring to understand the Human Paradox (The title of his weekly Radio show). ***Follow @TheWritingReflex on Instagram and Twitter.*** more…

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