Analysis of See You in My next Life



I have a distant lover, so distant you feel to me.
A Love nourished with ink & passionate metaphors.
To know your smile, to hear the sound of your voice and feel your laugh lines, gently caressing my skin...

To have the warm scent of your breath waking me in
the middle of the night. I need you closer.
Standing by my side. My heart longs for you.
So distant you feel to me, you’re like that star, shining so far...
All I can do, is get lost in its beauty.
You're like the rain, awakening the garden that’s in my soul.
In the caverns of my heart it resides so deep inside.
As I wonder will someday she stand by my side,
For never will I see my distant lover, until the end.
See you in my next life forever friend...
JPenarandaReflections©2015


Scheme ABC CXXXAXDDEEB
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101101111 011011100100 11111101111011111001011 110111111010 01010111110 1011111111 110111111111011 11111110110 110101000101011 00101111011101 11101111111 110111110100101 1101110101 1
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 737
Words 143
Sentences 14
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 11
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 284
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Submitted by JesusPenaranda on April 19, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Jesus Penaranda

Name: Jesus Penaranda Race: Cuban American Eye color: Hazel Occupation: Communications Hobbies: Photography, writing, spirituality, family outtings, napping Nick Name: Hace History: Hace was one of those kids in high school who got along with various niches. As a result, he ended up with many different types of friends from various nationality and as soon as he graduated traveled the United States from NY to California and places in between. Nonetheless he was accepted by all different cultures and was considered open minded. During a period of living in Texas he attended acommunity college as a electronics student, and somehow was lucky enough to land a job with a large utility company. Remained there and moved to Southern California. Were he took up the study of communication.. Other Facts: Extremely intuitive and sensitive, is an old soul...With an ability to learn something from anyone. I already lost touch with a couple of people I use to be.. more…

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