Analysis of 6:00am summary.



You had decided to become a sex worker.
Not the kind that would make your prudish nature quiver in disgust
But the kind that would put men on hold to charge by the second,
As you had been put on hold time and again.

I have these visions that we are together.
Unclear as if in another life, or this,
But they are fierce and leave me longing for you.
You would lay down in bed and invite me over by arching up your back just so I could get a glimpse of that which cannot be missed.

You would tell me 'we should be together'. Sturring up something inside me that can't get out to be anything tangible so it makes it's escape through my dreams.

It's getting to the point where opening my eyes isn't enough anymore.
I'll open them and look over just to see you called, or texted, or laid in the bed with me that night and we just so naturally fit together like a puzzle containing two pieces.

- A to B, B to A
- Do not attempt to fit to another
- Not compatible with different letters
- Eternally fucked unless combined.


Scheme AXXX AXXX X XX XAXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101010110 1011111101010001 101111111111010 11111111001 11110111010 01110010111 11110111011 11110100111011011111111011111011 1111111010111001111111110100111101111 110101110011100101 1101011011111111100111110111100010101010010110 011110 1101111010 10100110010 010010101
Characters 1,061
Words 204
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 2, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on April 09, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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