Analysis of Intimations of mortality



If only for a moment
I could see the world through younger eyes,
To look upon my life with new born innocence.
The innocence of a child.

Stop the clock!
Rewind the hours and the minutes!
Let me see the colours of my world in perfect hue.
Open again my ears to the music of the wisdom of age.

Allow my hands to touch once more the perfection of nature.
I would breathe and taste again the fragrance of my youth.
So to return and say, ‘Again, but not the same.’

Upon the battlefield of life I was taught to close my eyes.
To stop my ears against the cries of the wounded:

To touch, without feeling:
To breathe, without inhaling.
Lessons learned and in the final test…success.

The moment passed.
My open eyes sting with the bitter tears of age.
My youth? Gone.
In its place, the Wiseman, the Prophet, the Sage.


Scheme XAXX XXXB XXX AX CCX XBXB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 1101010 111011101 110111111100 0100101 101 100100010 111011110011 1001111010101011 011111110010110 1110101010111 110101011101 01010111111111 111101011010 110110 1101010 10100010101 0101 110111010111 111 01101001001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 796
Words 154
Sentences 17
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 2, 3, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by Novellini on February 04, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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