Analysis of The summit



In the frozen wastes of Antarctica
the only thing lacking
was the Sun...
which was found in excess
only in the Sahara Desert.

In the heat and aridity of the Sahara
the only thing lacking was...
an Oasis
which was found in excess
only in the Amazon rain-forests.

Immersed in the Amazon Oasis
the only thing lacking
was the Summit...
which was found in excess
only in the Himalayan Mountains.

Now that I've reached the highest summit
in the Himalayas
I see that you can't dream of
anything higher than this...

On the Summit
the security and serenity
are so soothing and undisturbed
that I could literally
die of Loneliness...

So for that reason..
since I want to live
the only solution is descent..

Translation by
PHILIP RAMP


Scheme aBcDx axeDx eBfDx fgxe fhxhg cxx xx
Poetic Form
Metre 001011100 010110 101 11101 100001010 0010110010 0101101 1010 11101 100010110 010010010 010110 1010 11101 100001010 111101010 00010 1111111 101011 1010 0010000100 1110001 1111000 11100 11110 11111 010010101 0101 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 695
Words 128
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 4, 5, 3, 2
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on October 29, 2014

Modified on March 14, 2023

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ILIAS FOUKIS

The greek poet ILIAS FOUKIS , was born on 20 August 1969 in Ioannina in Epirus in northwestern Greece. Began to write poetry since 1988 when he was student in the Lyceum. Published volume of poetry THE TESTAMENT OF A LESSER GOD , which has been translated into ten languages including English, French, Italian, Spanish, Portuguese, etc.. Has won literary awards - OSCAR DE DOS OURO VENCEDORES, Brazil 2012 - MASSIMO D'AZEGLIO, Italy, 2012, 2013 - CITA DEL GALATEO, Italy in 2013. His poem titled YOUNG GREEK SOLITARY was included in Poetry Anthology - U.S. Library of Congress. Works and lives in Athens. more…

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