Analysis of For Me



It hurts when you smile
When I can see the agony within you
It hurts when you laugh
When I can feel the pain inside it

Mandatory suicide that’s all you can think off
Of all dreams and wishes you could know off
And an alien stood in the fields of land
Thinking and know not how to react

Seems like the yesterday everything was fine
Could have been much more better
Could have been much more full of life
As dead they seems to you now and then

So nowadays when you smile
It hurts so extreme that
It agonize my pain
You would never give up this restrain

You tried your best and did he
You were true and could be thee
You were all alone and you were to be
The happiest emotional less to be free


Scheme AXXX BBXX XXXX AXCC DDDD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 11111 11110100011 11111 111101011 10010111111 1110101111 01100100111 100111101 110101011 1111110 11111111 111111101 110111 111011 11011 111011101 1111011 1010111 1010101011 010001001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 673
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by Azalea Spirit on October 04, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Abinash Parajuli

Abinash Parajuli is a Nepali poet, novelist, music critic and a journalist. Currently, he's acting a CEO/Executive Editor at MuzBuzz Monthly Magazine. more…

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