Analysis of Last Whiskey Sip



Oh! Won’t you help me drink?
The last whiskey sip
Coz I cant raise my hand
And it’s too fragile to pick
The glass is empty, just one sip due.
My home too far away, my friend is new.

Oh! Won’t you help me drink?
The last whiskey sip
Red whiskey blended to white wine
I drop my wallet somewhere, friend would you pay mine?
The night is clear with white moon and stars
My veins pumping liquor, heart so far away

Oh! Won’t you help me drink?
The last whiskey sip
I’m missing her madly, alone as I am
And she’s counting stars, finding me there
And all I could do is cry!


Scheme ABxxcc ABddxx ABxxx
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 01101 111111 0111011 011101111 1111011111 111111 01101 11010111 11110111111 011111101 11101011101 111111 01101 11001001111 011011011 0111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 561
Words 114
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted by Azalea Spirit on October 04, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Abinash Parajuli

Abinash Parajuli is a Nepali poet, novelist, music critic and a journalist. Currently, he's acting a CEO/Executive Editor at MuzBuzz Monthly Magazine. more…

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